Examine that comma, do you really want it there?
Reconsider the wording, your message, it's not clear
"You're message isn't clear
I don't understand what you're trying to say
- jumbled words, misplaced punctuation
A turn to the past, a return to the present
No connector, all collapses.
The significance of that comma,
I want to play around with structure.
The grammatically correct in a sentence
The basis of communication
communication no matter how clear,
is lost in subjectivity.
28 April 2014