• Nada Serhan


Examine that comma, do you really want it there?

Reconsider the wording, your message, it's not clear

"You're message isn't clear

I don't understand what you're trying to say

- jumbled words, misplaced punctuation

Your ideas,

I like"

A turn to the past, a return to the present

No connector, all collapses.

The significance of that comma,

that point

Repositioned, eliminated

Only because...

I want to play around with structure.


The grammatically correct in a sentence

The basis of communication

Lost, misunderstood,

communication no matter how clear,

is lost in subjectivity.

*Washington DC

28 April 2014

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